His Unveiled Passion novel Chapter 191
The room was warm from the central heating. Sienna had also taken off her coat. She walked over to the couch, picked up Naomi's coat, and held her own coat in one hand and Naomi's in the other, hanging both up before turning back with a bright smile.
"This place is perfect for a New Year's Eve party. What a nice spot to watch the fireworks and city lights."
"Right? Pretty great choice for New Year's, huh?" Naomi grinned.
Sienna nodded with a smile. "Yeah, yeah!"
"Why isn't Tess here yet?" Naomi glanced toward the door and pulled out her phone. "I'll give her a call."
Just then, the door opened.
Naomi looked up with a smile. "I was just about to call you, and you—what the hell?"
It wasn't Tessa who walked in—it was Stephen.
And Nancy.
The smile on Naomi's face froze instantly, replaced by a flicker of anger. She snapped, "Who invited them?"
Sienna shook her head. "Not me."
Henry also shrugged. "I have no idea."
Quentin rubbed the back of his neck awkwardly. "Didn't you say you wanted a New Year's party? What's a New Year's party without my best friend?"
"You're such a goddamn idiot, aren't you?" Naomi exploded. "You know he cheated on Tess, right? He hooked up with a freaking celebrity! I threw this party to cheer Tess up and to help her get over him! What the hell were you thinking, inviting Stephen?"
"Huh?" Quentin blinked, completely dumbfounded. "You didn't tell me not to invite Stephen! He's been my best friend for over ten years…"
He rubbed his nose, sighing. "Come on, don't get so worked up. They broke up, so what? We're all in the same circle. It's not like we can just cut someone off forever just because they split up, right?"
"Oh, please." Naomi scoffed. "Why the hell not? Mr. Jacobson is way out of my league. If cutting ties is what it takes, then so be it!"
Seeing that Naomi was serious, Quentin started to panic. "Hey, come on, it's not that deep. Don't go making it a whole 'let's never talk again' thing. Just hear me out—"
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Oh my god, when is this book finishing... they're not even back together yet and more nonsense side plots.....
Whoa! Hahahahahaha! Go, Sophia! Burn, stupid Rowena! Lol...
Sooo~ Chapters 310-318 were just a repeat of Jacqueline’s punishment, official expulsion from the Jacobson family, and arrest. With few changes since Tessa and Stephen are not together this time. So Tessa didn’t witness how Jacqueline was tortured at Stephen’s base, though at least Tessa was still called over and witnessed how Stephen officially expelled Jacqueline from the Jacobson family and how Stephen’s subordinate made Jacqueline grovel in front of Tessa. Lol. I hope Jacqueline’s really out of the story now....
Also a lot of chapters were missing here. I went back to the application where it was originally published that’s why i know that this site is not reliable...
Fucked up book! Seems like the authors were not talking to each other. LOL. Yes authors, because of the inconsistencies....
The story went downhill after pg200 1. Why is Jacqueline back… she was expelled from the family already 2. There was no reason for Rowena to be mad at Tessa 3. The Jacobson already knows that Stephen wants to get back witb Tessa after they deal with James, so why is Rowena pushing hard? LOL 4. The family also knows that Stephen and Nancy have some sort of deal. The story was okay from page 1-199, but clearly it’s a thumbs down. I can deal with grammatical errors, but story errors is just different now....
This is funny! Jacqueline was also the culprit why James knew that nancy was Stephen's cousin. So, really, what happened when steohen tortured jacqueline hahah...
I wonder how many authors does this book have? Suddenly jacqueline was back and continue to bad mouth tessa. And was stunned that tessa knows her feelings about stephen. And then rowena was freaking mad at tessa too; because there werw multiple instances that tessa sharp-tongued her. 🤣...
What is wrong with the story flow? At chapter 160-164 there’s this whole thing about Stephen revealing in front of all the Jacobsons family members about Jacqueline’s inappropriate feelings towards him and her involvement in murder. There’s even this “Just like that, Jacqueline was officially expelled from the Jacobson family. Stephen then promptly handed her to the authorities.” So I was already glad the bitch is out of the picture. And then suddenly at chapter 236, Jacqueline appears again like nothing happened, still being the adoptive daughter of the Jacobson family and the family being unaware of her feelings for Stephen. Seriously? Doesn’t make sense anymore....
The latest update is just a repetition of the previous chapters...